NANO LAND !!

[IRENE ADLER]

Keith never thought he could meet the perfect woman, until he met her. Alinora, sweet gentle , kind. A spark has grown between them. He thought he was in heaven, she thought she was in heaven as well. What happens when one and the other find a secret. A secret that they should not have known. What if this changes everything that they knew about themselves. What stands at the border of secrets and love. Though Keith and Alinora find themselves in love , will something stop them , their own secrets from accepting one another. How in the end will a happy relationship flourish if one and the other don't know who they are or were they came from.

So I am writting a novel in 30 days tell me what you think of this.

[joannejefferson]

Sounds like a plausible plot. I think once you flesh it out, it has the potential to be really good.

[IRENE ADLER]

Awww yeah I alredy have around 4 thousand words written out and maybe with the final edit I could find some possible readers thanks so much jo jo for the comment <3

[IRENE ADLER]

Chapter 1

She started to walk out from where she was standing, the man in the porch making her look down at the ground. The weather was nice, cloudy with not a hit of color in the sky. She should be getting back, a desolate house full of servants was not a place to be left alone. Yet could she really leave it all, all the love she shared and cared for with this man.

The weeks and month that they had been in bed. Yet the memory of why she was here, why she was even in this difficult position was the real question. She could feel her husband on her finger tips, her lips, yet the man before her seemed more of a presence of a husband than her past one. But which man was better, which man could make her feel like the light was bright.

The last one had always been busy, planning his sleep a vampire in the non literal sense. While this one was a mortal , a simple man who had a poets heart. Walking over towards the table, She sat down and grabbed the mans hand and started to caress it staring at it. A long life line she saw, two children, a home but if anything of that had to do with her it would be fate who played her games with the both of them not her.But even life had its way, how long had it been since they where together.

Three, four years.. yet this had to stop her husband would awake soon and she would be in trouble for meddling in mortal affairs. But anyway it was time to say goodbye, there where other matters that she needed to take care of. Besides there was also the fact that her butler had said that he had some wonderful news.

That damn twisted monster, what news could he have that would make her happy. Besides the fact that her husband had awakened, those where not News at all in fact they where bad news. That half mad creature could not possibly ever have news, and yet at the same time throughout all that had happened could it be possible that his good news could be the thing she wanted to detest about all.

Brushing her hair out of her face, she sat down in front of him and felt his hand pick up her own hand and stare at her eyes." I think we should get married " He suddenly said, my throat closing up at the thought that I had to say that I was leaving him. " I am leaving you .. And no I wont get married" She said standing up as she started to escort himself out of his room.

The white door at the far end directing her exit as she was secure about her decision. She had to do this, for his safety and for hers she had to. Her husbands jealousy could ruin the one moment that they shared.She did not want that at all, in fact she was not going to turn back and look at him that would make her stay.

Opening the door, she noticed from the corner of her eyes his body stepping away, his arm raised to halt her just a few steps where she was. She was glad he was retreating, it was the best that they could do for the both of them. Life would continue onwards, she would become a wife , a mother , respect her position even if it bored her to death. But the burning in her heart maybe signaled something else amidst the chaos and rubble that went on in her day to day life. But then again, she had a feeling deep inside her that something was going to happen, it would changed her life, her way of looking at things.

But the true thing of the matter was , if she wanted to actually know this at all. Would she know if it was right, would she know what to do with the situation, would she even know at all what it meant. Could she possibly decipher its meaning before it happened , that was the bigger question.

[IRENE ADLER]

Chapter 2

She walked out of the room, her hand closing the door shut while she walked in the hall towards the elevator. The stench of the hallway making her gag as she smelled something foul. Yet at the same time, she wondered if it was herself that was stinking.

When she arrived home, she would need to take a bath and hear those news that her butler had. If it was good news, like visitors coming to see her this after noon then she would be at ease. If it was something to do with her husband , then she would not be calm.
Her husband , she did not know why she was still in love with him.

The way that they had met, the planned marriage, the desert ,the honeymoon,it was all a lie. How funny, and naive she had been to think that a man with knowledge of the past and what was to come in the present He had used her , and yet had she minded no. Only when she found out what he trully was, did she try to move away.

Escapes, Fake passports, Dummies, Shooting ranges, and Gun classes, all prepared for her to escape him and what did she do she stayed still after he told her that he knew that she was no longer in lover with him. But now things were different, he was not here and she was left alone at last. Peace , and dreams could finally be brought back from the deepest regions of her mind to do them and complete them.

Seeing the elevator up ahead, she walked towards it and saw the double doors open to reveal two men. " Madame a car is waiting down stairs for you" They both said in union ship as she sighed. Whoever had brought these men, where surely to be well paid and with the task to bring her back to the manor.

" Shall we boys" She told them and enter the elevator. Seeing the men pick the lobby floor , she sighed and wondered if what was expecting her home was her husband. Seeing the doors open , she saw herself in her room.

How in the world, was reality bended and she was imagining things. Yet when she felt her two arms grabbed and dragged outside towards the sunlight, she tried to wiggle away. She was not going to ask to many questions about the reasons why she was brought here, or why she was being treated with such forceful attention.

She could walk, she had two feet but if they where just making sure she did not get away then they where doing a good thing. Passing the hall way outside of her room, and towards the kitchen and to the right she found herself being shoved inside a dark room.

This room she had never been inside, it was plain, with no decoration. Yet incense burned, the kind that was only found in Arabia and India. She noticed that the curtains where closed , and that beside a chair was Ohded her butler, a grin on his face like he was ready to laugh in her face.

But then when she felt a hand touch her shoulder, she felt her body tense. Whoever that hand belong to, it was touching her in spots that she had only known to be reasonable spots for a lover to touch. Her attitude was calm, not worried ant not scared, when faced with an enemy you should never be in your life scared of a enemy.

Suddenly, she started to feel something hard grace her neck , it felt like teeth. But why teeth, but no in the end she noticed the subtle point of the two fangs. Then she knew who they belonged to , she knew perfectly well that it was him. What information would he get by drinking her blood, he would know everything, her lover, her dreams, her wishes, her life without him. Yet she could not deny one thing , she was happy that the bastard would get what he deserved in every sense of the way

[IRENE ADLER]

Chapter 3

Blood is what she saw through her eyes, blood everywhere as the man in front of her flexed his arms and stretched out. She had forgotten what it was like to be fed from, to feel the pain course through her body, the convulsions , the twisting of her muscles. Yet the man in front of her, the one who had drained her. Caressed her like a good lover her cheek. Her body again started to convulse as she felt like she wanted to scream.

Her eyes going behind as she felt hot liquid drench her mouth. A smile crossing her lips as she started to suck the liquid from her husbands wrist as she sat up and looked at his eyes. The black eyes that she had not missed, the calm smile, the regal posture that he wore. Though funny enough, he had the same charms to get her to do whatever he wanted her to do. But he should know by now that she was different.

His hand pulling her away from his wrist as she fell on the bed again. She was not on a bed when he first had bitten her, and there was no sunlight either. " Why did you do it.." he asked suddenly, a bandage being wrapped by his servant as she chuckled. She found it to be quite amusing his sudden question.

Yet how did they come to their room was the real question she needed to know. " Because I do not love you" she breathed out, her eyes looking up at her husband who was staring at her. His hand caressed her hair as he grabbed her throat quickly and lied down on top of her. Her hand stroked his left cheek as she felt power seep through his skin.

The old power of the Greek gods, the Egyption gods, the undead and beyond a man full of life and death surrounding him that she had only but gag and fall in a trance to fulfill his desires and help him. Why could she have not married someone normal, someone who had a life to share with her. Yet at the same time, she could not be any happier about telling him the truth. Feeling his hand wrap harder around her neck, she sighed and caressed his bald head.

" Because you were only using me to fed yourself, all my life my youth you have tried to turn me into a creature just like yourself with no success in the process, because you just cant accept that at one point I wish to die" She explained and felt his hands caress her hips and hold her.

" You will learn to love me again , ill make sure of that " he whispered, If loving her by force was the key to his problem, then she would not be loved at all in fact she would close every door for him. She would show him that without light , there was no place for darkness yet the proud husband she once admired was gone. As she started to wiggle away and tried to pull his fingers away.

His grasp hold tighter , as she felt a boa wrap around her and squeeze her making her gag a little and cough. " If you think ill ever love you again , your mistaken.. " She told him , and saw his hold on her loosen and saw him chuckle and lied down next to her. Her hand quickly checking her throat to see if he had left a mark or bruised it as she knew how he lost his temper.

She moved away from the bed as she felt halted by Ohded and sighed, " Lock her up in her room, and gather my army awaken them Ohded that is an order." He said to his servant as she felt her lips lock with his her body suddenly feeling numb as she started to feel really sleepy.

His kisses filling her mouth as she was rested next to his place, Her eyes half opened half closed. This is what paralyzed felt she guessed, but she would break out of here and she would go back to her lover , the man